User contributions for Conrad Leviston
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9 November 2005
- 22:5722:57, 9 November 2005 diff hist +540 N Papyrus (Maplet) No edit summary
- 14:2014:20, 9 November 2005 diff hist +276 m Talk:Recipes No edit summary current
8 November 2005
- 09:5809:58, 8 November 2005 diff hist +532 Cunnan:Village pump No edit summary
7 November 2005
- 12:0012:00, 7 November 2005 diff hist +78 m Mulberry No edit summary
- 11:4211:42, 7 November 2005 diff hist +197 m Barony of Krae Glas Shire box
- 11:3211:32, 7 November 2005 diff hist +18 m Late Period Dress No edit summary
- 11:3111:31, 7 November 2005 diff hist −66 m Venetian changed to redirect current
- 11:2611:26, 7 November 2005 diff hist +34 m Svein Forkbeard No edit summary
5 November 2005
- 13:0013:00, 5 November 2005 diff hist +503 m Duchessa No edit summary current
3 November 2005
- 22:2622:26, 3 November 2005 diff hist +1,767 N Duchessa No edit summary
- 22:1422:14, 3 November 2005 diff hist 0 m Febus →Music
- 22:1122:11, 3 November 2005 diff hist +84 m Febus →Choreography
- 21:2221:22, 3 November 2005 diff hist +21 m War scenario categorise
- 21:2021:20, 3 November 2005 diff hist +25 Nm Saute redirect
- 21:1721:17, 3 November 2005 diff hist +1 m Cassandra Branle →Steps Used: format fix
- 21:1021:10, 3 November 2005 diff hist +4 m Anglo-Saxon →Your [[SCA]] [[Persona]] is Anglo-Saxon: link
- 21:0921:09, 3 November 2005 diff hist +29 m Whorler categorise, links
- 21:0721:07, 3 November 2005 diff hist +25 m Spinning technique Category:Fibre Arts
- 21:0521:05, 3 November 2005 diff hist +15 m Cyser category
- 21:0421:04, 3 November 2005 diff hist +28 m Cyprus No edit summary
- 20:5020:50, 3 November 2005 diff hist +89 m Silk worm maplet link
- 00:3100:31, 3 November 2005 diff hist +23 Nm Silkworm redirect current
- 00:3000:30, 3 November 2005 diff hist +280 N Silk worm stubbish
- 00:2300:23, 3 November 2005 diff hist +4 m Silk wikify
2 November 2005
- 22:2322:23, 2 November 2005 diff hist +33 m 15th Century Italian dances No edit summary
- 22:2222:22, 2 November 2005 diff hist +2,322 N Cupido No edit summary current
- 21:3121:31, 2 November 2005 diff hist +229 m Antonio Cornazano →Dance Manual
- 21:1821:18, 2 November 2005 diff hist 0 m Category:Weaving No edit summary current
- 21:1721:17, 2 November 2005 diff hist +22 m Weft thread category:weaving
- 21:1621:16, 2 November 2005 diff hist +22 m Warp thread category:weaving
- 21:1521:15, 2 November 2005 diff hist +26 m Warp faced category:weaving
- 21:1421:14, 2 November 2005 diff hist +22 m Weft category:weaving
- 21:1321:13, 2 November 2005 diff hist −3 m Warp changed category to weaving
- 21:1221:12, 2 November 2005 diff hist +54 N Category:Weaving No edit summary
- 21:1221:12, 2 November 2005 diff hist +17 m Weaving added weving category current
- 21:1021:10, 2 November 2005 diff hist +23 m Armorial No edit summary
- 20:5720:57, 2 November 2005 diff hist +617 m User talk:Cian Request for pedantry
- 20:4620:46, 2 November 2005 diff hist +143 m Cunnan:Page of the Month added future pages
- 20:4120:41, 2 November 2005 diff hist +99 m Poume d'oranges (recipe) formatting
- 20:3520:35, 2 November 2005 diff hist +34 m Cunnan:Page of the Month →Heraldic Jargon: added two
- 20:2020:20, 2 November 2005 diff hist +65 m Warp Category:Fibre Arts, reword
- 20:1820:18, 2 November 2005 diff hist +25 m Worsting Category:Fibre Arts
- 20:1720:17, 2 November 2005 diff hist +17 m Spinning Category:Fibre Arts
- 15:4315:43, 2 November 2005 diff hist +720 N User talk:205.188.116.7 No edit summary current
1 November 2005
- 21:5621:56, 1 November 2005 diff hist +2,390 N Duchesco No edit summary current
- 21:1421:14, 1 November 2005 diff hist +34 Nm College of St.Monica redirect current
31 October 2005
- 22:3322:33, 31 October 2005 diff hist +82 m 15th Century Italian dances →H-M
- 22:2522:25, 31 October 2005 diff hist +185 m 15th Century Italian dances →H-M
- 22:1322:13, 31 October 2005 diff hist +3,057 Nm Angiola No edit summary current
- 21:3021:30, 31 October 2005 diff hist 0 m Renaissance dance capitalisation
- 21:2921:29, 31 October 2005 diff hist +28 m Renaissance dance →Dance Styles: ballo and bassa danza
- 20:5920:59, 31 October 2005 diff hist +1 m Basse Dance punctuation current
- 20:5820:58, 31 October 2005 diff hist +25 Nm Basse Danse redirect current
- 20:5820:58, 31 October 2005 diff hist −10 m 15th century →[[Renaissance Dance]] Links
- 20:5620:56, 31 October 2005 diff hist +542 m Galliard Preamble
- 20:4020:40, 31 October 2005 diff hist −191 Main Page New pages of the month
- 20:3320:33, 31 October 2005 diff hist +97 m Cunnan:Page of the Month updated
29 October 2005
- 00:4800:48, 29 October 2005 diff hist +33 m A Greene Forest →Of Trees, Herbes & Shrubs
- 00:4100:41, 29 October 2005 diff hist +968 N Mulberry (Maplet) No edit summary current
- 00:0600:06, 29 October 2005 diff hist +93 m Mulberry Maplet link
28 October 2005
- 11:2411:24, 28 October 2005 diff hist +26 m 15th Century Italian Dance steps No edit summary current
27 October 2005
- 12:5912:59, 27 October 2005 diff hist −13 m Mulberry rewritten
- 12:5712:57, 27 October 2005 diff hist +86 m Voltatonda mentioned volta del gioioso current
- 12:5412:54, 27 October 2005 diff hist +179 N Volta del gioioso No edit summary current
- 12:4812:48, 27 October 2005 diff hist +1,076 m Alesandresca No edit summary
- 10:5010:50, 27 October 2005 diff hist +1,254 N Alesandresca No edit summary
26 October 2005
- 14:1714:17, 26 October 2005 diff hist +100 m Rostiboli Gioioso →Other reconstructions
- 14:1414:14, 26 October 2005 diff hist +98 m Petit vriens →Other reconstructions
25 October 2005
- 13:4813:48, 25 October 2005 diff hist +372 Angelosa sort of completed current
- 12:2312:23, 25 October 2005 diff hist +336 m Angelosa No edit summary
- 11:1511:15, 25 October 2005 diff hist +471 m Angelosa No edit summary
- 10:0010:00, 25 October 2005 diff hist +987 Nm Angelosa first bit
- 00:2200:22, 25 October 2005 diff hist +296 m 15th Century Italian dances →D-G
- 00:1100:11, 25 October 2005 diff hist +1,678 N Amoroso Isghuarda No edit summary current
24 October 2005
- 12:5812:58, 24 October 2005 diff hist +36 m 15th Century Italian Dance →External links
- 12:5412:54, 24 October 2005 diff hist +114 m 15th Century Italian Dance J&J link
23 October 2005
- 23:2623:26, 23 October 2005 diff hist +109 m Saltarello No edit summary
- 12:0212:02, 23 October 2005 diff hist +260 Nm Saltarello stub
- 11:5511:55, 23 October 2005 diff hist +459 m Cunnan:Village pump →Spam flood
- 11:4611:46, 23 October 2005 diff hist 0 m Bassa Danza typo
- 11:4611:46, 23 October 2005 diff hist +212 Bassa Danza saltarello details
- 11:4211:42, 23 October 2005 diff hist +653 Nm Misura No edit summary current
21 October 2005
- 00:3100:31, 21 October 2005 diff hist +88 m Dance music music database link
- 00:2700:27, 21 October 2005 diff hist +439 m 15th Century Italian dances more detail
- 00:1300:13, 21 October 2005 diff hist +147 m Febus →Music: link to music
- 00:0100:01, 21 October 2005 diff hist +69 N File:Febus.mid 2 part setting of music for the bassadanza Febus, by Conrad Leviston.
19 October 2005
- 23:2923:29, 19 October 2005 diff hist +132 m 15th Century Italian dances Bassadanza music lengths
- 23:1323:13, 19 October 2005 diff hist +202 m Talk:Army No edit summary
- 23:1023:10, 19 October 2005 diff hist +5 m Army sergeant
- 20:5320:53, 19 October 2005 diff hist +9 m 15th Century Italian dances →A-C
- 20:4920:49, 19 October 2005 diff hist +1,020 N Corta No edit summary current
- 20:0920:09, 19 October 2005 diff hist +740 N Voltatonda No edit summary
- 20:0220:02, 19 October 2005 diff hist +235 m Mezavolta more detail current
- 19:0519:05, 19 October 2005 diff hist +25 Nm Bassa danza redirect current
- 18:5218:52, 19 October 2005 diff hist +4 m Riverentia link current
- 18:5118:51, 19 October 2005 diff hist +448 N Riverentia No edit summary
- 18:0818:08, 19 October 2005 diff hist +7 m 12th century underwear →Women: link fix and typo
- 16:3616:36, 19 October 2005 diff hist +149 m 15th Century Italian dances No edit summary
- 00:5300:53, 19 October 2005 diff hist +19 m 15th Century Italian dances →A-C
- 00:5000:50, 19 October 2005 diff hist +479 m 15th Century Italian dances →A-C: more detailed information
18 October 2005
- 00:5700:57, 18 October 2005 diff hist +308 Inns of Court Dances links, dance links
- 00:4400:44, 18 October 2005 diff hist +278 Ballo No edit summary
- 00:4100:41, 18 October 2005 diff hist +325 N Ballo No edit summary
- 00:3000:30, 18 October 2005 diff hist +45 m 15th Century Italian Dance steps added salto
17 October 2005
- 23:0723:07, 17 October 2005 diff hist +204 m Category talk:Device heraldry I agree with Cian
- 16:4816:48, 17 October 2005 diff hist +21 m SCAdian category
15 October 2005
- 13:3113:31, 15 October 2005 diff hist +444 N Movimento No edit summary current
- 13:1513:15, 15 October 2005 diff hist +1,248 Rostiboli Gioioso →Reconstruction: more detail, and link to Del's reconstruction
- 12:1912:19, 15 October 2005 diff hist +828 Ripresa fuller descriptions current
- 01:0801:08, 15 October 2005 diff hist +20 m Rostiboli Gioioso formatting
- 01:0601:06, 15 October 2005 diff hist +1,650 N Rostiboli Gioioso Rough choreography
- 00:3800:38, 15 October 2005 diff hist +392 m 15th Century Italian dances some classification
- 00:1000:10, 15 October 2005 diff hist +25 Nm Bassadanza redirect current
- 00:0900:09, 15 October 2005 diff hist 0 m Bassa Danza link fix
- 00:0900:09, 15 October 2005 diff hist +480 N Bassa Danza No edit summary
- 00:0300:03, 15 October 2005 diff hist +49 m Barony of Forgotten Sea categorise
- 00:0000:00, 15 October 2005 diff hist +13 m Barony of Three Rivers category fix
14 October 2005
- 23:5923:59, 14 October 2005 diff hist +40 m Barony of Three Rivers wikify
13 October 2005
- 14:3514:35, 13 October 2005 diff hist +472 N Ripresa partial
- 10:3410:34, 13 October 2005 diff hist +3 m New World foods spelling, capitalisation
- 10:3210:32, 13 October 2005 diff hist +143 Continentia completed current
- 09:5709:57, 13 October 2005 diff hist +352 N Continentia incomplete
- 09:2809:28, 13 October 2005 diff hist +364 N Mezavolta No edit summary
- 08:5708:57, 13 October 2005 diff hist +116 m 15th Century Italian Dance →External links
- 00:1600:16, 13 October 2005 diff hist +282 m 15th Century Italian Dance philosophy
11 October 2005
- 23:2723:27, 11 October 2005 diff hist +68 m Iron Maplet link
- 23:2123:21, 11 October 2005 diff hist +289 m 15th Century Italian Dance steps more organized steps, based on Domenico's setting
- 00:3800:38, 11 October 2005 diff hist −6 m Piva this time for sure current
- 00:3800:38, 11 October 2005 diff hist −1 m Piva link fix
- 00:3800:38, 11 October 2005 diff hist +331 N Piva No edit summary
- 00:2400:24, 11 October 2005 diff hist +22 m Petit vriens →Choreography: slight correction
10 October 2005
- 23:3823:38, 10 October 2005 diff hist +20 Nm Martial redirect current
- 23:3123:31, 10 October 2005 diff hist +4 m Barony of Septentria →Arms: links in blazon
- 23:2423:24, 10 October 2005 diff hist +259 m Cunnan:Village pump →Notable Persons
- 12:3812:38, 10 October 2005 diff hist +464 Nm User talk:69.198.82.41 welcome current
- 00:0900:09, 10 October 2005 diff hist +392 N Doppio No edit summary current
9 October 2005
- 23:2923:29, 9 October 2005 diff hist +226 N Sempio No edit summary
- 22:4622:46, 9 October 2005 diff hist +356 N User talk:Donovan Ravenhull welcome
- 22:3922:39, 9 October 2005 diff hist +500 N User talk:Aurenca welcome current
- 22:3422:34, 9 October 2005 diff hist +43 N Shire of West Dragonshire Shire of West Dragonshire moved to Shire of West Dragoningshire current
8 October 2005
- 23:5223:52, 8 October 2005 diff hist −90 m Febus removed cut and paste error
- 23:4723:47, 8 October 2005 diff hist +983 m Febus →Reconstruction: completed
- 22:4322:43, 8 October 2005 diff hist +21 m Rhino-hide category current
7 October 2005
- 11:0611:06, 7 October 2005 diff hist +108 m Passant tidy up
- 00:4500:45, 7 October 2005 diff hist −50 m Febus removed pet piva
- 00:4400:44, 7 October 2005 diff hist +1,405 N Febus First third of dance
- 00:2500:25, 7 October 2005 diff hist +14 m Petit vriens manuscript
- 00:2400:24, 7 October 2005 diff hist +277 m Cunnan:15th Century Italian Dance and another thing current
- 00:1000:10, 7 October 2005 diff hist +1 m Realm avoided double redirect
- 00:0900:09, 7 October 2005 diff hist +95 m Petit vriens music
- 00:0700:07, 7 October 2005 diff hist +2,272 N Cunnan:15th Century Italian Dance No edit summary
6 October 2005
- 23:3223:32, 6 October 2005 diff hist −1,367 Cunnan:Projects 15th Century Italian Dance
- 19:4819:48, 6 October 2005 diff hist +27 Nm Inns of court redirect current
- 19:4719:47, 6 October 2005 diff hist +3 m Allemande fiddling
- 19:4619:46, 6 October 2005 diff hist +13 m Double →Variants
- 11:2711:27, 6 October 2005 diff hist +281 Cunnan:Village pump midrealm wiki
- 11:2411:24, 6 October 2005 diff hist +740 Nm Antonio Cornazano thumbnail
- 11:0811:08, 6 October 2005 diff hist +73 m Groups of Midrealm tweaking
- 11:0711:07, 6 October 2005 diff hist +12 m Groups of Æthelmearc No edit summary
- 11:0611:06, 6 October 2005 diff hist +27 m Groups of Æthelmearc categorise
- 11:0511:05, 6 October 2005 diff hist +44 m Groups of Midrealm formatting
- 10:5610:56, 6 October 2005 diff hist +4,300 Nm Groups of Midrealm No edit summary
- 10:4710:47, 6 October 2005 diff hist −4,171 m Kingdom of Middle trimmed down groups and created link
- 10:4110:41, 6 October 2005 diff hist +35 m Kingdom of Middle →External Link
5 October 2005
- 20:0920:09, 5 October 2005 diff hist +407 m Petit vriens No edit summary
- 19:3719:37, 5 October 2005 diff hist +1,707 N Petit vriens mostly done
- 18:2718:27, 5 October 2005 diff hist +5 m 15th Century Italian Dance steps link fix
- 18:2718:27, 5 October 2005 diff hist +246 N 15th Century Italian Dance steps No edit summary
- 00:1900:19, 5 October 2005 diff hist +26 m Anglo-Saxon →Your [[SCA]] [[Persona]] is Anglo-Saxon
4 October 2005
- 23:4023:40, 4 October 2005 diff hist +969 N Alfred the Great started on page.
- 23:3023:30, 4 October 2005 diff hist +535 N Talk:Recorder No edit summary current
- 23:2823:28, 4 October 2005 diff hist −35 Recorder historical evidence
- 23:0823:08, 4 October 2005 diff hist +29 m Dormant categorise and typo
- 20:5720:57, 4 October 2005 diff hist +313 User talk:Thomas thanks
3 October 2005
- 20:2720:27, 3 October 2005 diff hist +323 N User talk:US71 Welcome current
- 20:1220:12, 3 October 2005 diff hist +735 N User talk:Thomas Welcome
2 October 2005
- 16:4316:43, 2 October 2005 diff hist −1 m Kingdom of Atlantia kingdom box colour
- 16:2916:29, 2 October 2005 diff hist +40 m Barony of Windmasters hill redirect current
- 12:1512:15, 2 October 2005 diff hist +234 m 15th Century Italian Dance external link, a little context
- 12:0912:09, 2 October 2005 diff hist +1 m Cunnan:Recipes from the Forme of Cury appulmoy
- 12:0612:06, 2 October 2005 diff hist +25 Nm Powder Fort redirect current
- 12:0612:06, 2 October 2005 diff hist +15 m Appulmoy (recipe) wikify
- 11:5311:53, 2 October 2005 diff hist +26 Nm Petit Rinense redirect current
- 11:5211:52, 2 October 2005 diff hist +975 15th Century Italian dances comleted list
- 11:3411:34, 2 October 2005 diff hist +40 m Contentezza d'Amore (Il Ballarino) No edit summary
- 11:3211:32, 2 October 2005 diff hist +984 Contentezza d'Amore (Il Ballarino) finished reconstruction
- 11:0211:02, 2 October 2005 diff hist +1,907 Contentezza d'Amore (Il Ballarino) 2/3 of choreography
- 10:2610:26, 2 October 2005 diff hist +1,402 Nm Contentezza d'Amore (Il Ballarino) everythnig except choreography, and media
- 09:4709:47, 2 October 2005 diff hist +38 m Dances from Nobiltà di Dame link tweak
- 09:4209:42, 2 October 2005 diff hist +71 m Cunnan:Projects →[[Forme of Cury]]
- 09:4009:40, 2 October 2005 diff hist 0 m Cunnan:Recipes from the Forme of Cury updated redacted recipes
- 09:3909:39, 2 October 2005 diff hist +35 m Daryols (recipe) categorise and wikify
- 09:3709:37, 2 October 2005 diff hist +37 m Bukkenade (recipe) wikify, typos
- 09:3509:35, 2 October 2005 diff hist +43 m Erbolat (recipe) categorise and wikify
- 09:3109:31, 2 October 2005 diff hist −49 m Pico della Mirandola slight rearrangement
- 00:1600:16, 2 October 2005 diff hist +369 Main Page New pages of the month
- 00:1500:15, 2 October 2005 diff hist −1,238 m Cunnan:Page of the Month No edit summary
29 September 2005
- 15:1015:10, 29 September 2005 diff hist +1,052 N 15th Century Italian dances A-F
- 10:4510:45, 29 September 2005 diff hist +170 N Dance steps from Playford No edit summary current
- 10:3810:38, 29 September 2005 diff hist +408 N 15th Century Italian Dance stubbish
- 08:5508:55, 29 September 2005 diff hist +1 m Greece typo
- 08:5408:54, 29 September 2005 diff hist +737 N Greece No edit summary
28 September 2005
- 15:3115:31, 28 September 2005 diff hist +537 N Armings No edit summary
- 15:1415:14, 28 September 2005 diff hist +228 m Stingo External links
- 15:1215:12, 28 September 2005 diff hist +124 m Mayden Lane external links
- 14:5914:59, 28 September 2005 diff hist +217 m Hearts ease external links
- 14:4914:49, 28 September 2005 diff hist +226 m Grimstock External links
- 14:4714:47, 28 September 2005 diff hist +26 Nm Set and Turn redirect current
- 14:4514:45, 28 September 2005 diff hist 0 m Chestnut (dance) typo
- 14:2614:26, 28 September 2005 diff hist +219 m Chestnut (dance) external links
- 14:2114:21, 28 September 2005 diff hist +547 N Double No edit summary
- 14:0414:04, 28 September 2005 diff hist +20 Nm Double left redirect current
- 14:0314:03, 28 September 2005 diff hist +20 Nm Double right redirect current
- 13:5513:55, 28 September 2005 diff hist +216 m Cuckolds all a row external links
- 13:3113:31, 28 September 2005 diff hist +116 m Boat-man link to facsimile
- 11:4711:47, 28 September 2005 diff hist +77 m Playford's Dancing Master →Offsite Links: facsimile link
- 11:3211:32, 28 September 2005 diff hist 0 m Renaissance dance Ebreo was 15th century
27 September 2005
- 11:3111:31, 27 September 2005 diff hist +323 N Set and turn No edit summary
- 11:2611:26, 27 September 2005 diff hist +21 m Wayfaring category:SCAism
- 11:2511:25, 27 September 2005 diff hist +415 Nm User talk:US 71 hi current
- 11:1611:16, 27 September 2005 diff hist +217 N Dance midi files No edit summary
- 11:1211:12, 27 September 2005 diff hist +19 m Renaissance dance →Dance Music: midi link
26 September 2005
- 12:4812:48, 26 September 2005 diff hist −15 m List of Saints' Feastdays Reverted edit of 165.228.131.11, changed back to last version by Conrad Leviston
22 September 2005
- 14:4814:48, 22 September 2005 diff hist +14 m Herbs →See also
- 14:4714:47, 22 September 2005 diff hist +33 m Naples Category:Kingdoms (medieval) current
- 14:3714:37, 22 September 2005 diff hist +35 m 12th Century proverbs categorise
- 14:3114:31, 22 September 2005 diff hist +35 m 12th Century bathing categorise
- 12:0912:09, 22 September 2005 diff hist +230 N Seguito Scorso No edit summary
- 11:4911:49, 22 September 2005 diff hist +1 m Lovage fixed category current
- 11:4611:46, 22 September 2005 diff hist +32 m York Category:Cities (medieval)
- 11:4611:46, 22 September 2005 diff hist +32 m Venice Category:Cities (medieval)
- 11:4611:46, 22 September 2005 diff hist +30 m Rome Category:Cities (medieval)
- 11:4511:45, 22 September 2005 diff hist +32 m London Category:Cities (medieval)
- 11:4511:45, 22 September 2005 diff hist +32 m Florence Category:Cities (medieval) current
- 11:4411:44, 22 September 2005 diff hist +32 m Constantinople Category:Cities (medieval) current
- 11:4411:44, 22 September 2005 diff hist +32 m Bruges Category:Cities (medieval)
- 11:4411:44, 22 September 2005 diff hist +28 Nm Category:Cities (medieval) No edit summary
- 11:4211:42, 22 September 2005 diff hist +390 Milan more substantial history
- 11:1211:12, 22 September 2005 diff hist +21 m Bardic Circle category:SCAism
19 September 2005
- 19:0419:04, 19 September 2005 diff hist +141 m Pliny the Elder No edit summary
- 18:5918:59, 19 September 2005 diff hist +21 m Crafts chnaged scribing to calligraphy and illumination
- 18:4818:48, 19 September 2005 diff hist +2,569 N Boat-man No edit summary
16 September 2005
- 12:0012:00, 16 September 2005 diff hist +523 N Essex outline
- 11:3111:31, 16 September 2005 diff hist +32 Nm Chanson de Williamor redirect current
- 11:2911:29, 16 September 2005 diff hist +449 N Chanson de Geste a start
- 00:4000:40, 16 September 2005 diff hist +1 m Mugwort (Askham) →Arthemisia.: typo current
- 00:3900:39, 16 September 2005 diff hist +426 N Mugwort No edit summary current
15 September 2005
- 23:3323:33, 15 September 2005 diff hist +34 m Aragon category:Kingdoms (medieval)
14 September 2005
- 22:0122:01, 14 September 2005 diff hist +237 m Godfrey of Bouillon death and worthiness
- 21:4821:48, 14 September 2005 diff hist −15 m Greenland typos, grammar and formatting
